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It should be magical…there should be a thousand yellow daisies and candles and a horse and I don’t know what the horse is doing there unless you’re riding it, which seems a little over the top, but it should be more than… this.”  -Lorelai Gilmore (Gilmore Girls)

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Stepping into a room filled with yellow daisies, I find myself smiling.

Swirling around the room, my heart is bursting.

Stunned, I stop suddenly, realizing there must be at least 1000 yellow daisies!

Speechless, I pick one up and let the sweet aroma fill my senses.

Starry-eyed, I surrender my heart.

Somehow, I always knew it was you.

This poem is in response to the Tuesday Prompt:

Write a poem where every line begins with the same letter, and no line begins with the same word. For more information check I you here. Come and join in the fun!

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Jenna Gee

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Whispers of the Heart: 1000 Yellow Daisies to the Sweetest Surrender

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Hello, my rays of sunshine! I’m Jenna Gee, aka the Sunshine Artist, always seeking to brighten the world around me and seeking to help others embrace the magic that’s inside them. Every day is an empty canvas waiting to be painted and an empty page waiting to be written. Let’s fill today with the magic of the world around us!


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25 thoughts on “Whispers of the Heart: 1000 Yellow Daisies to the Sweetest Surrender

    1. The you so much for such a warm response to my poem! ❤️😊
      When I sat down to write a response to this poetry prompt, I started by asking myself what I wanted to write about. My inner voice first responded with yellow roses…but then I had an image of this episode of the Gilmore Girls pop in my head and felt truly inspired by the warm romantic sentiment of 1000 yellow daisies.🌼😊🌼

      1. 😊 poetry and the craft of writing is such a powerful and creative outlet, it feeds my soul and I’m glad I can do the same thing for others.❤️

      2. Thank you, it’s pleasure to know you too. I enjoy our conversations,, your responses are always so thoughtful and engaging.😊

  1. This is lovely Jenna. I can imagine you in a room full of daisies, outshining them with your radiance. ☺️❤️

  2. This is so lovely Jenna! I can imagine you in a room full of daisies, outshining them with your radiance. ☺️❤️

    (I think my previous comment has gone into your spam! 🙄)

    T

  3. You’ve written well! Very sweet, full of emotion.

    Here, let me have a try.

    Dude, you are on fire, dancing like a diva.
    Don’t let it stop you, it’s your time to shine.
    Do what you have always done, unchanging, unwavering.
    Dishes, they must be done.
    Duties unfulfilled, pile up like your student debt.
    Dark, damp and disgusting, leave the door unopened.
    Did you eat the last slice of pizza?

    What we learned is that I’m not much of a poet.

    1. Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it!😊

      I love how it starts out and it has a fun edge to it!😁 If you had fun with it that’s what counts!😉

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